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Seeing you, stepfather
Passed out on the chaise longue,
It makes me want to sleep,
Even though I gave my
Evening to a nap to
Escape from acid reflux.
Your eyes penetrate their lids,
Fixed on the ceiling of the
Drawing room. The business
Dinner party was obviously
Quite draining, I understand.
I’ll tread quietly on the stairs.
Passed out on the chaise longue,
It makes me want to sleep,
Even though I gave my
Evening to a nap to
Escape from acid reflux.
Your eyes penetrate their lids,
Fixed on the ceiling of the
Drawing room. The business
Dinner party was obviously
Quite draining, I understand.
I’ll tread quietly on the stairs.
Even though I like this one better than the others I've recently written, I still think I need to find a new way to write.
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i find your poetry to be quite amazing. i love how you throw a bit of humanity into every thing. like 'acid reflux' and the word eyesoup in the poem "inhale over exhale time." there is something that i think you and your style are doing that i havent seen before. ....im going to watch you i think.